Project: Zenith Beyond Eclipsing The Dragon's Rue

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Zenith Beyond Eclipsing The Dragon's Rue (Working Title)


Djehkaujaa Dragon 2003 002 by BlackUniGryphon
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I keep having anxiety or panic attacks about it, but, my art is just sort of taking over.... I'm at a point where I can;t fight it anymore... and over the past few months, and especially since March, I'm really going through something...

Some of my old concept work is totally missing, or lost, or I haven;t found it, but I spent a long time scanning old stuff, including rough sketches, and unfinished doodles.

I wasn't sure what to name my story for years, since I first started the concept at least in 1997. It's changed titles a number of times, and I spent many hours at a time, and weeks, deciding on a title. What I came up with (this far) is probably this:

"Zenith Beyond Eclipsing The Dragon's Rue" (Working Title)


I was hoping to do some painting(s) today, but I need to wait for my spouse to get home because I don't know where the paint brushes are.
They will mostly be paintings or sky, landscapes, and clouds, all aerial stuff.
I might also need to get a 3D program eventually and mess around with it (even tho' I stink at that).

Dragon Animated Lip Synch by BlackUniGryphon

The 2 main characters are the dragon named Djehkäujaa, and Lively. But, there are other characters also.
Djehkäujaa is a dragon, but in a sizable chunk of the story she's a humanoid form.

Djehkeujaa Wind  Swept by BlackUniGryphon Djehkaujaa Character Design 1999 Head Scans HQ by BlackUniGryphon 
Djehkaujaa Doodles 2003 001 by BlackUniGryphon Djehkaujaa Character Design 1999 Head Scan 2 by BlackUniGryphon Djehkaujaa Dragon 2003 001 by BlackUniGryphon Djehkaujaa Character Design 2000 Chracter Design 2 by BlackUniGryphon Djehkaujaa Character Design 2000 Chracter Design 1 by BlackUniGryphon
Djehkaujaa Color Portrait by BlackUniGryphon Djehkaujaa Color Human M Sheet by BlackUniGryphon Lively Expressive Model Sheet by BlackUniGryphon Djehkaujaa Expresiv ModelSheet by BlackUniGryphon Djehkaujaa Facial Model Sheet by BlackUniGryphon Djehkaujaa Rotation ModelSheet by BlackUniGryphon

I had originally intended this to be a feature film, and I wrote the first screenplay around 1999-2001 on my free time in Philadelphia, and sometimes in Delaware.

I've been redesigning and tweaking the story this year. I went in a somewhat more progressive direction in the themes in the film, in much the same way as Gene Roddenberry and Arthur C. Clark did in portraying what a world COULD BE LIKE, whether its the future, or even NOW. Or, what it COULD HAVE BEEN, and SHOULD HAVE BEEN. Not to be too cryptic...

It will be a big, grand, and picturesque fantasy, but also Sci-Fi. It will ALSO be an alternate world... meaning not this world, but a different version of our world, and far more fanciful... only not what it sounds like if you only read this... the landscapes will be VERY fanciful, colorful, and UNUSUAL.  I will also be including a different landscape of infrastructure, in a time of transition. That will include transportation, a new kind of "agriculture", energy, and other progressive concepts depicted either starting, in practice, or being built....

My villain/antagonist character, will pretty much the same as I'd originally written him in 1999.. it's incredibly ironic because when I first wrote him, in 1999, I felt he was FAR TO EXTREME that I was worried he would be too unbelievable... having said that, the politics of NOW (2016) have politicians that are FAR MORE EXTREME THAN HIM. I NEVER THOUGHT I WOULD EVER SEE THE DAY! I'm still working on his new name right now because his original name I felt isn't "original" enough... I also need to develop him more... I don't have a real 'look" for him yet...

Pressed Lovers Sketch by BlackUniGryphon

Another important character was the main love interest for Lively.

Animation Picking up the Goat by BlackUniGryphon Lively Back Bend by BlackUniGryphon Quick Pencil sketch Livelly by BlackUniGryphon

Mature Content

Flower Child Lively Colored by BlackUniGryphon


I was agonizing over this FOR YEARS. It was SO PAINFUL. Pain & anxiety like you would not even understand. I often felt guilty and depressed over it. I just COULD NOT DECIDE on how to make him.... then, I had a major breakthrough recently, and it was like a whole lot of weight off my chest. I realized I could actually do multiple characters, and there didn't need to be just one. Once I did that, this character seemed to develop a lot more, and I even have a name for him that I've FINALLY settled on!

Last year, I was playing with the idea of him especially on IMVU, and I had come up with Xingtao 星套.

You can see some photos of the avatar on my IMVU Tumblr page:
www.imvu.com/catalog/web_mypag…

or his Profile on IMVU:
www.imvu.com/photos/albums/152…

But, I wasn't really satisfied with 星套 as the name, so I came up with 兴涛 (Xingtao), and then I wanted a surname for him, and I got it from the Feng Shen Ban (Yan Yi) of the dragon Kings of the 4 Seas which is: 敖 Ao.

So his full name is: 兴涛 Ao Xingtao


That was incredibly difficult to come up with!

Ever since I definitively named him, it was much easier to come up with his character.

Fallen by BlackUniGryphonI think I will have him change his hair a few times also. This was another major breakthrough I had over developing him. He also can be 2 distinct personality moods, 1 as an introvert, and the other as an extrovert, but also a mystique and an unknown aspect of him even to himself. He will also go through changes as the story go along, because I like the idea of a person progressing, or even digressing, or regressing, and overcoming pitfalls in life. I figure many persons could relate to a personality of someone that has screwed up, or overdone things in life, and had to learn difficult lessons, and actually come to a point in life where they want self improvement, when before they were reckless and selfish, and then the regret some decisions, and want to be more self controlled, refined, and humbled. (also known as maturity, or maturing)
I like characters that can be redeemed, or learn from their past, even if sometimes they get the lesson wrong a few times, or misinterpreted the conclusions...

I also think having other male characters makes it more interesting of a story dynamic, and a lot more believable...

 I also want to take much of the beginning content with Lively and take it to a more European style, because I don't like the way love or sexuality is done in North America or Asia. 

Lovers Designed by BlackUniGryphon
  Lively With Lover by BlackUniGryphon Lively With Her Lover by BlackUniGryphon Lively Lovers 2008 Rough doodle 001 by BlackUniGryphon Lively Theater 2008 001 by BlackUniGryphon Sketch of Livley and Beloved by BlackUniGryphon




I also have some other concept work from another old project:

"Eyewitness"


I have so many concepts for that because it was intended as a series of shorts, or short stories, many with music, or musicals, others not so much.

Tons of that concept work is found here: blackunigryphon.deviantart.com…

Eyewitness Congressional 1995 by BlackUniGryphon Eyewitness: Dragons 1999 by BlackUniGryphon Dujiao Wu Qilin 2002 pastel by BlackUniGryphon  Eyewitness: Wu Dujiao Qilin B by BlackUniGryphon  Diva Melusine Nixie Concept 004 by BlackUniGryphon

There is also some bleed-through or overflow from some of the stuff from this project to/with my Dragon Project.
And, I also have another different story that I wrote a bit on that is somewhat similar to the Dragon Project called "Lively's Mini Unicorn". I have a few chapter already written a few years ago, and I have rewritten that many times also. Those I would also like to rewrite, some other time... it's also very cartoonish, and somewhat comical.

Lively With Unicorn Colts by BlackUniGryphon  Lively n Pip Frollicking by BlackUniGryphon

I'm just not really doing anything with this story right now.

I also wrote some concept music, and lyrics last month.
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  I'm not surprised that you characters have changed--and your art. We change, the world changes,,,. And, the way characters are portrayed certainly changes!
  It is not likely that your villain character was really any more realistic or un-realistic back a few years,,, but rather, the way we liked to see such characters portrayed in comics and movies and movies made from comics (etc.) has changed. TV and current events are putting some of the best and some of the worst of humanity right in front of our noses right now!
  What you might consider is simply this: what do YOU want to show the world? Do you want to add a lot of cruelty, or just to use some of it to portray goodness?
  A lot of wise people over the years have said that if drama does not enlighten and uplift, then it ultimately fails. The success of a film usually proves that out, too.
  Good luck!